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This is Sahi and the Dubhar-chu.
What's a Dubhar-chu, you might ask? Well, you can google it if you'd like. He's a furry beastie. but I've been rather vague about how he looks for a reason. Just as I've been vague about how Sahi looks. I like it that way - if you'd like to add that as a critique, that's okay. Maybe I'll go back and do something about it if it really seems to bother people, after all - I do have a good image of both in my head.
I don't know where they came from, I don't know where they're going. But this is the start of a wonderful set of characters I think. What about you? Please - critique away!
... I only added the mature content filter because of the reference to the Dubhar-chu's wangle-dang.
What's a Dubhar-chu, you might ask? Well, you can google it if you'd like. He's a furry beastie. but I've been rather vague about how he looks for a reason. Just as I've been vague about how Sahi looks. I like it that way - if you'd like to add that as a critique, that's okay. Maybe I'll go back and do something about it if it really seems to bother people, after all - I do have a good image of both in my head.
I don't know where they came from, I don't know where they're going. But this is the start of a wonderful set of characters I think. What about you? Please - critique away!
... I only added the mature content filter because of the reference to the Dubhar-chu's wangle-dang.
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I thoroughly enjoyed this.
I can't point out any flaws, grammar and spelling wise, my eyes and brain aren't good with those. The flow of the story good. I find this very well written and of course, extra points for creativity.
Good Job!
I can't point out any flaws, grammar and spelling wise, my eyes and brain aren't good with those. The flow of the story good. I find this very well written and of course, extra points for creativity.
Good Job!